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Memorex
02-26-2008, 11:45 AM
2 friends of mine wrote this and wanted to see responses from teh public comments welcome


Betrayal

How dare you?
Get out and never come back!
I took care of you through hard times.
I gave you my heart,
I gave you my world,
I loved you and I trusted you.
But you were not true to me.
For only a moment of pleasure,
You lost it all with me.
You betrayed me and cheated.
I even had a child.
I will never forgive you!
Just as I will not forgive myself
Because the guilt eats me away,
That child is not from you.

AGK
02-26-2008, 02:34 PM
nice poem, thumbs up ;)

wildberries
02-26-2008, 05:27 PM
hmmm... weird